Lite nytt för omväxlings skull

Tjipp o haj. Jag sitter för närvarande och skriver låttexter till ett par ljudkillar på skolan (Hank och Packe för dig som känner dem) och tänkte jag lägger upp några av dem. Har fått allt från "OMG!" till mer skeptiska "mm ok" för dem, så kommentera fritt :P

*Puzzle of Leaves*
Wet leaves tangeling
to the asphalt
like I hold my dreams
to you and only you

Raindrops falling down
creating fake tears
so that I can cry
for what we never had

Walking the paths
I used to walk
the water rises
and wash them all away

Where should I go
when my mind is heavy
and my feet are wet
as autumn leaves falls

Now I'm stuck here
in this my eternal fall
Now I'm stuck here
solving the puzzle of leaves

and as the mud
turns into my own
rorschach test of life
I question it all

why am I stuck here
in this my eternal fall
why am I stuck here
solving the puzzle of leaves

what do I see
in earths own paper
of ginger gold
and silver tears

I see what I wanted
now it's forever lost
and the only comfort
are these fake tears of mine

So I am stuck here
in this my eternal fall
and again I try
to solve the puzzle of leaves


*Pre Hibernus*
Feeling earths cold arm
Breathing slowly stopping
The true gaze ever shifting
Fearing to forever close

A breaking dawn with no warmth
Filling all there is to feel
Breaking everything it can
Scorching with it's bare cold

Crushing one's will
Chilling the skin
Numbing one's senses
And freezing the heart

Animals flee and humans tuck in
Tell yourself it soon will pass
Not knowing will ease the pain
Not caring would make it go away

Listen to the wind's cry
Hear the changes come
held down by those chains
We Watch them try to run

Breaking one's will
Chilling the skin
Numbing one's senses
And freezing the heart

Now watch when it all happen
as It comes to another close
the colours start to fade away
and all that remains is snow

Och den här blev refuserad, men jag gillar den ändå:
*Working Title*
Walking is harder now
the puddles knee deep
my coat gettin' heavy
and my fingers going numb
just like my heart
but I cannot stop
Walking

Ever forward, on and on
in this autumn dark
all that I hope for
is that maybe just maybe
you would stand hands free
near that my favourite place
Waiting

But I'm not naive
of course you won't
cause you already found
that new hand to hold
a little fast maybe
but really I would be
Wellwishing

and yet I don't
falter by even a step
altough you must have left
already and made a new pact
against all logic I find
that now I start to run
Wishing

Tack för mej!
Tjubb!